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| author | John Wright <wright@chem.wisc.edu> | 2018-04-05 07:41:09 -0500 |
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| committer | John Wright <wright@chem.wisc.edu> | 2018-04-05 07:41:09 -0500 |
| commit | ba8235a76c56f6fba6eb9919f3a64054f17fe79d (patch) | |
| tree | 088dc21e2600a0e9f6cc9f8e4eee8015e224f12b /introduction | |
| parent | a556dba6d7b956ab6469916d886dfeea8dcc2932 (diff) | |
JCW Summary of Changes
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diff --git a/introduction/chapter.tex b/introduction/chapter.tex index be4572d..b8877e6 100644 --- a/introduction/chapter.tex +++ b/introduction/chapter.tex @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ flexable in the kinds of experiments that they can perform. % This dissertation contains several projects undertaken to improve the reliability and accessibility
of MR-CMDS. %
While MR-CMDS will never be a single-shot experiment, there are many improvements that can improve
-data collection speed. %
+data collection speed. % JCW- NOT SO SURE IT CAN'T BE SINGLE SHOT
Necessary calibration, especially OPA calibration, can be made robust and fully automatic. %
Common artifacts can be addressed through relatively simple modifications in hardware and
software. %
@@ -64,11 +64,12 @@ frequency-domain coherent multidimensional spectroscopy. % Due to its diversity and dimensionality, MR-CMDS data is challenging to process and represent. %
The data processing tools that a scientist develops to process one experiment may not work when she
attempts to process an experiment where different experimental variables are explored. %
-Historically, this has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing
+Historically, this % JCW- "THIS" SHOULDN'T BE A NOUN STANDING ALONE AS THE SUBJECT OF THE SENTENCE
+has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing
workflows that need to be changed for each particular experiment. %
These changes take time to implement, and can become stumbling blocks or opportunities for
error. %
-Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may make dissuade scientist from
+Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may dissuade A scientist from
creatively modifying their experimental strategy, or comparing their data with data taken from
another group. %
This limit to creativity and flexibility defeats one of the main advantages of the MR-CMDS
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