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diff --git a/introduction/chapter.tex b/introduction/chapter.tex
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@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ there is no theoretical limit to the frequency range that can be resolved in thi
 MR-CMDS can be homodyne-detected, so experiments with unique output colors are much more

 accessible.  %

 Finally, because the components are more self-contained, MR-CMDS instruments tend to be more

-flexable in the kinds of experiments that they can perform.  %

+flexible in the kinds of experiments that they can perform.  %

 

 % TODO: boilerplate about the kinds of things that make up an MR-CMDS instrument... OPAs, delays...

 

@@ -69,13 +69,13 @@ has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing
 workflows that need to be changed for each particular experiment.  %

 These changes take time to implement, and can become stumbling blocks or opportunities for

 error.  %

-Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may dissuade A scientist from

+Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may dissuade a scientist from

 creatively modifying their experimental strategy, or comparing their data with data taken from

 another group.  %

 This limit to creativity and flexibility defeats one of the main advantages of the MR-CMDS

 strategy.  %

-\autoref{cha:pro} describes a new software package, WrightTools, that greatly simplifies CMDS data

-processing.  %

+Chapter \ref{cha:pro} describes a new software package, WrightTools, that greatly simplifies CMDS

+data processing.  %

 WrightTools defines a \emph{universal format} that is capable of representing any CMDS dataset,

 regardless of dimensionality or the axes scanned.  %

 A set of simple functions are used to convert raw data into this universal format.  %

@@ -177,6 +177,10 @@ Chapter [...] describes an experiment performed on PEDOT:PSS.
 useful because...

 we learned...

 

+% BJT: consider getting rid of the following paragraph

+% if it remains, it needs to address a more 'broader impacts approach' rather than simply

+% re-summarizing

+

 Despite challenges in software, hardware, and theory MR-CMDS is a crucial tool in the hands of

 scientists.  %

 This dissertation describes several ways to make MR-CMDS more accessible through software and