From ba8235a76c56f6fba6eb9919f3a64054f17fe79d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Wright Date: Thu, 5 Apr 2018 07:41:09 -0500 Subject: JCW Summary of Changes --- abstract.tex | 7 ++++--- introduction/chapter.tex | 7 ++++--- spectroscopy/chapter.tex | 3 ++- 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/abstract.tex b/abstract.tex index dd08aa0..2c9b4ed 100644 --- a/abstract.tex +++ b/abstract.tex @@ -5,9 +5,10 @@ Coherent multidimensional spectroscopy (CMDS) encompasses a family of experimental strategies involving the nonlinear interaction between electric fields and a material under investigation. % -This approach has several unique capabilities: 1. resolving congested states [CITE KLUG], 2. -extracting spectra that would otherwise be selection-rule disslowed [CITE BOYLE], 3. resolving -fully coherent dyanmics [CITE], 4. measuring coupling [CITE], and 5. resolving ultrafast dynamics +This approach has several unique capabilities: 1. resolving congested states [CITE KLUG and % JCW Zhao and Wright-JACS], +2. extracting spectra that would otherwise be selection-rule disslowed [CITE BOYLE], 3. resolving +fully coherent dyanmics [CITE % JCW Pakoulev and Wright], +4. measuring coupling [CITE], and 5. resolving ultrafast dynamics [CITE]. % CMDS can be collected in the frequency or the time domain, and each approach has advantages and diff --git a/introduction/chapter.tex b/introduction/chapter.tex index be4572d..b8877e6 100644 --- a/introduction/chapter.tex +++ b/introduction/chapter.tex @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ flexable in the kinds of experiments that they can perform. % This dissertation contains several projects undertaken to improve the reliability and accessibility of MR-CMDS. % While MR-CMDS will never be a single-shot experiment, there are many improvements that can improve -data collection speed. % +data collection speed. % JCW- NOT SO SURE IT CAN'T BE SINGLE SHOT Necessary calibration, especially OPA calibration, can be made robust and fully automatic. % Common artifacts can be addressed through relatively simple modifications in hardware and software. % @@ -64,11 +64,12 @@ frequency-domain coherent multidimensional spectroscopy. % Due to its diversity and dimensionality, MR-CMDS data is challenging to process and represent. % The data processing tools that a scientist develops to process one experiment may not work when she attempts to process an experiment where different experimental variables are explored. % -Historically, this has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing +Historically, this % JCW- "THIS" SHOULDN'T BE A NOUN STANDING ALONE AS THE SUBJECT OF THE SENTENCE +has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing workflows that need to be changed for each particular experiment. % These changes take time to implement, and can become stumbling blocks or opportunities for error. % -Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may make dissuade scientist from +Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may dissuade A scientist from creatively modifying their experimental strategy, or comparing their data with data taken from another group. % This limit to creativity and flexibility defeats one of the main advantages of the MR-CMDS diff --git a/spectroscopy/chapter.tex b/spectroscopy/chapter.tex index 3bde7b4..030edd5 100644 --- a/spectroscopy/chapter.tex +++ b/spectroscopy/chapter.tex @@ -67,6 +67,7 @@ For simplicity, we consider a single transition dipole, $\mu$. % The Hamiltonian which controls the coupling of or simple system to the electric field described in ...: +% jcw- ISN'T IT JUST MU DOT E WHERE E IS A VECTOR THAT IS TIME DEPENDENT, NOT A TIME DERIVATIVE \begin{equation} H = H_{\circ} - \mu \dot E \end{equation} @@ -90,7 +91,7 @@ In Dirac notation \cite{DiracPaulAdrienMaurice1939a}., an observable (such as $\ \end{equation} The complex wavefunction is called a \emph{ket}, represented $|b>$. % The complex conjugate is called a \emph{bra}, represented $ + \left -- cgit v1.2.3