From ba8235a76c56f6fba6eb9919f3a64054f17fe79d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: John Wright Date: Thu, 5 Apr 2018 07:41:09 -0500 Subject: JCW Summary of Changes --- introduction/chapter.tex | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'introduction/chapter.tex') diff --git a/introduction/chapter.tex b/introduction/chapter.tex index be4572d..b8877e6 100644 --- a/introduction/chapter.tex +++ b/introduction/chapter.tex @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ flexable in the kinds of experiments that they can perform. % This dissertation contains several projects undertaken to improve the reliability and accessibility of MR-CMDS. % While MR-CMDS will never be a single-shot experiment, there are many improvements that can improve -data collection speed. % +data collection speed. % JCW- NOT SO SURE IT CAN'T BE SINGLE SHOT Necessary calibration, especially OPA calibration, can be made robust and fully automatic. % Common artifacts can be addressed through relatively simple modifications in hardware and software. % @@ -64,11 +64,12 @@ frequency-domain coherent multidimensional spectroscopy. % Due to its diversity and dimensionality, MR-CMDS data is challenging to process and represent. % The data processing tools that a scientist develops to process one experiment may not work when she attempts to process an experiment where different experimental variables are explored. % -Historically, this has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing +Historically, this % JCW- "THIS" SHOULDN'T BE A NOUN STANDING ALONE AS THE SUBJECT OF THE SENTENCE +has meant that MR-CMDS practitioners have used custom, one-off data processing workflows that need to be changed for each particular experiment. % These changes take time to implement, and can become stumbling blocks or opportunities for error. % -Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may make dissuade scientist from +Even worse, the challenge of designing a new processing workflow may dissuade A scientist from creatively modifying their experimental strategy, or comparing their data with data taken from another group. % This limit to creativity and flexibility defeats one of the main advantages of the MR-CMDS -- cgit v1.2.3